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Post by Paige Palladroom--♥ on Apr 1, 2008 20:35:50 GMT -5
♠ Name: Paige Anne Palladroom ♠ Blood: Muggle-Born ♠ Age & Year: 16 Years Old - 6th Year ♠ Gender: Witch ♠ Best Subject: Charms ♠ Worst Subject: Potions ♠ Classes: Herbology, Charms, Care of Magical Creatures, Defense Against the Dark Arts, and Potions. ♠ Appearance: Paige is elegant and sweet, as are her looks. She's short for her age, but she likes her slender, petite body. That doesn't mean she's- er, well- flat, but she doesn't have many curves- At least not in the right places, as some of her much prettier, more stuck-up friends would say. She isn't very bulky or strong, so she is very graceful and lithe.
Paige's features are very pretty if you are happening to be paying attention. Her complection is very smooth and her skin tone is a delicate, pale shade that never really changes whether she tries to tan it or not. Her hair is usually twisted into big, blonde curls around her face. Caramel blonde highlights line the roots of her hair, darker streaks underneath. Sometimes she puts it up into a bun or ponytail, but she always leaves a little in front of her face; Something she always does, just a little too self-consious without her safety net. Her liquid eyes are a hazy gray-brown color; They sparkle delicately in the sunlight.
Her style isn't very unique; Simply pretty and sophisticated. When she's in class, of course, she wears the robes as she must, but around the dorms she likes to wear blouses and skirts just like any other girl. She doesn't try to show off, just wears whatever she's comfurtable in, and whatever she likes to see herself in; Nothing too tight or skimpy. She hates those girls who wear the tinyest mini-skirts and tight tops.
♠ Personality: Paige is always laid back and down to Earth. She's not a party animal, but not a nerd either, for that matter. She isn't always in the best mood, she doesn't always try to act her best. Sometimes she can even get panick attacks and nervous breakdowns under too much pressure, but hey, that's just Paige.
She has flaws, just like any other witch; Not many, but some. For example, she can get very stuborn when it comes to arguments and her opinions. Even if she happens to be wrong, she won't admit it to whoever was right. Also, she has a bit of a temper if someone tries to manipulate her or use her. Revenge is something she often has on other people.
She is overall sweet and lovable and she loves to help others. She loves animals as well. She can also be risky and fun; Around her friends, she laughs a lot; Around boys, she acts just like any other girl with a crush. She'll be flirty but can still catch herself daydream in the middle of class. ♠ History: Paige's past isn't very interesting, but it's worth a little story. Being Muggle-Born is a hardship for her, but she's gotten used to the teasing. Well, this won't make sense unless it's told from the beginning...
When Paige was a little girl, she always found herself making things heal faster when others had cuts or bruises, and loved to play around with "potions". As she made these potions, some of them actually seemed to work. One, for example, had healed her sister's skin free from any acne. Her family became more and more worried about what their daughter was doing, what she was becoming.
When she turned 11 and got her letter from Delusion Academy, her family gasped and shuddered, afraid of their own daughter. Her father had a bit of a temper and after yelling, "I will have no witches at my house!" He kicked her out the door and sent her on the next train to Delusion Academy.
Paige turned up there, her eyes red and puffy from crying, asking many questions. The headminister/headmistress gladly helped her and sent her to her dorm. Paige has now been going there for many years and hasn't heard a word from her muggle family since. ♠ Ten Characteristics: Graceful, Elegant, Sweet, Stubborn, Edgy, Loving, Smart, Fun, Brave, and Optimistic.
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Post by » matthew jamieson. on Apr 1, 2008 20:44:48 GMT -5
Meh, she's kind of a Mary Sue. >_> 'She has flaws, just like any other witch; Not many, but some.' You say she has flaws but I don't see any in there. Also, compared to our accepted character application, it's much shorter and less detailed. You seem to use a lot of fillers and you repeat yourself a lot. I'll stick this in pending for now.
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Post by Paige Palladroom--♥ on Apr 1, 2008 20:58:24 GMT -5
Oh okay... I'll add more details and stuff to it.
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